On The Screen - Part 2 - Second Draft
This Draft came out looking a lot better than the last, however this draft seemed to be way to messy for my liking. It just seemed like there is touch going on and Personality 2 was way to dark. However looking back, even though this is much better I have seen more problems, the cutting out around the glass was very tacky and not done very well. In This Draft I also decided to add the title "Staying In" but when I put it in with normal text it just looked boring and out of place, so I searched for ways to make it more relatable to my idea, so I had the idea of making the text looked cracked like the glass, and I think it came out looking much much better that it just being the normal blocky text.
