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assemblage part one

SOMEONE YOU LOVED - LEWIS CAPALDI
i liked how the notes flowed off each other towards the end however i didn't like the fact that i couldn't fit all the other notes on the paper as i was unaware of the context rule // Iteration 1
i liked how all the notes fit onto the one page but i didn't like how the shapes were too big // Iteration 2
i liked how the shapes sort of complemented each other but i didn't like how the last three notes didn't fit so i had to use the context rule to change its origin // Iteration 3
i liked how this had a minimalistic vibe to it but i disliked how inconsistent the shapes of note B (hexagon) was // Iteration 4
similarly for this iteration i loved the minimalistic style but i didn't like how i had to add a context rule to change the origin because it went out of the page // Iteration 5
For this iteration i changed it to landscape to see how it would look and i liked it but i didn't like how i forgot to add one note and how inconsistent the shapes and sizes each note were // Iteration 6
i like how theres less negative space in this iteration however it still didn't fit in one go without the context rule // Iteration 7
this iteration had the same coordinates as the last but i changed it to landscape which made the placements of note G (semi-circle)  look good to me but i didn't like the coordinates of note F (L shaped) in landscape // Iteration 8
I fixed up the coordinates from the last iteration and it made it look better however i didn't like how it overlapped and how the note G (semi-circles) were too far apart from each other // Iteration9
i like how it was evenly spread throughout the whole page but i still disliked how some of the notes overlapped and i got some coordinates wrong on accident // Iteration 10
for this iteration i decided to change the shape of note A to a triangle but i didn't like it and i didn't like how some notes overlapped but i liked the coordinates of note G(semi-circles) because it made it's placement on the Page look nice
for this iteration i changed the shape of note A to a circle and i really liked how it looked but i still didn't like how some of the notes overlapped and touched because it made it look to clustered // Iteration12
i liked how the coordinates gave it a stair case pattern but i didn't like how the notes didn't fit on the page so i had to add a context rule // Iteration 13
for this iteration i changed the orientation of note B and E to be upright and i liked how it looked but i forgot to add one other note B and i didn't like how the shapes sort of overlapped each other // Iteration 14
i liked how it sort of flowed all together in a systematic order and i didn't like how there was a rip of black paper onto the page and how note A (circle) was touching B // Iteration 15
i liked the new coordinates/ shape of note A (square) and i disliked how there was a lot of negative space // Iteration 16
i liked how there was a sort of systematic flow in this piece but similarly to the last iteration i didn't like how there were a lot of negative space // Iteration 17
for this iteration i changed the sizes of the shapes to be smaller and i really liked how it looked as it flowed better but i accidentally put in the coordinates wrong and forgot to add a note // Iteration 18
for this iteration i oddly liked how the overlapping of notes looked but i didn't like how there was a cluster of notes at the top corner // Iteration 19
for this iteration i changed the orientation of the shapes and i like how it all fit in one direction and i didn't have to add a context rule but i accidentally misplaced note G and some of note B which i didn't like // Iteration 20
i changed this iteration to landscape and i like how note E looked but i didn't like how the coordinates were wrong and the notes were touching // Iteration 21
for this iteration i inverted the notes which made the notes pop out more and look good however i didn't like the coordinates for note G and F // iteration 22
in this iteration i changed the coordinates for note G and F but i didn't like how the notes were placed towards the end however i liked how it was in a sort of checkered like pattern at the beginning // Iteration 23
i liked the pattern in the beginning and the new shape of note F but i dint like how it was too crowded in the corner because of the constant overlapping // Iteration 24
similarly to the last iteration i like how it was in a checkered like pattern which gave it a sort of systematic flow but i didn't like how note B overlapped on note G // Iteration 25
i really liked the overlap of note F but i didn't like how it just abruptly ended in the top corner // Iteration 26
for this iteration i attempted to make it look like two borders on the side but i didn't like how it didn't finish all the way to the end on one of the sides // Iteration 27
in this iteration i liked how it had a zig zag look to it but i didn't like how empty the beginning was and how clustered the top corner turned out // Iteration 28
in this iteration i changed the layout to be landscape and i really liked how it looked with the context rule as-well but i didn't like how the two lines of shapes weren't centered // Iteration 29
i attempted to make this iteration look like a square and i sort of liked how it turned out but i didn't like how i messed up some of the coordinates because i got too carried away // Iteration 30
this iteration was abit of a mess and i didn't really like how notes G and F were placed onto the paper // Iteration 31
i liked how the top corner were sort of evenly spread but i disliked the coordinates of note G and F // Iteration 32
i like how it all flows into one sort of line which makes it look nice and i didn't really like how note G overlapped note B  // Iteration 33
the staircase pattern looked nice but halfway through i realised i was placing it down wrong according to the coordinates // Iteration 34
this iteration is my favourite as i liked how it had this sort of staircase pattern going on and how the notes overlapped perfectly // Iteration 35
i liked how its like curve like pattern and how the notes overlapped perfectly without looking like a mess but the little cluster in the top corner irritated me // Iteration 36
the pattern of this iteration was intriguing however i didn't particularly like how it clustered abit in the top corner // Iteration 37 
for this iteration i changed the shape of G to a circle and i liked how the placements of note F were aligned nicely despite it not continuing all the way to the corner // Iteration 38
i really liked the pattern at the end with the note F and B because it flowed together nicely although i didn't particularly like how note B overlapped on note G // Iteration 39
the triangles in this iteration is what i loved as it fit together perfectly however i accidentally misplaced one of the note E's // Iteration 40
FAVOURITE ITERATIONS
overall, these two iterations were my favourites because of how they flowed off each shape/ note in a sort of systematic order which made it stand out to me despite the large negative space surrounding it
assemblage part one
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assemblage part one

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